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Jim Fenton
05-27-2009, 05:32 AM
Image created in Maine this past weekend as one of the group stepped out of the heavy seaweed where they had been feeding and headed over to where I was positioned for a look see.
Nikon D300, 500VR, TC14EII, UniWB, Flat tone curve, ISO 640, F6.3, 1/640, +.7 EV compensation applied.
Randy Stout
05-27-2009, 07:12 AM
Jim:
Your bird is sharp, well exposed, nice angle.
I find the OOF foreground mildly distracting, and think toning down the brightness a little would help.
I would also remove the extra tiny catchlight.
Thanks for sharing.
Randy
Ed Cordes
05-27-2009, 08:25 AM
The thumb does not do this image justice. The bird is tack sharp and the colors are super. I might consider cropping the bottom off to the top of the OOF rock on the left; then, as Randy suggested, toning down the remaining OOF rock that is left.
Stu Bowie
05-27-2009, 08:37 AM
Lovely low angle, and I like how you have included him in his enviroment. Well exposed with good detail, but I feel this is actually oversharpened a tad.
Axel Hildebrandt
05-27-2009, 09:10 AM
I like the setting and the OOF rocks in the foreground are not distracting in my opinion. If at all, I would crop a tiny bit off the bottom. I agree regarding less sharpening and would remove the lower catchlight.
Jim Fenton
05-27-2009, 09:46 AM
-Cut back on the sharpening a hair (must be my eyes as the original looked OK on my screen?)
-Removed the 2nd naturally occuring catch light (no flash was used)
-Cropped the bottom a hair
-Dropped the luminousity on the OOF forground rocks a bit as well.
How does the rework look?
Axel Hildebrandt
05-27-2009, 09:48 AM
The repost looks great!
Jim Fenton
05-27-2009, 09:55 AM
Great....I done something right today :)
Randy Stout
05-27-2009, 09:55 AM
Jim:
I like it. I suspect the extra catchlight was a reflection off the water.
Randy
Chris Kotze
05-27-2009, 11:55 AM
Super pose and angle the repost looks great
Dick Glover
05-27-2009, 09:49 PM
Repost looks great and the sharpness just right.
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