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Dave Phillips
05-26-2009, 07:22 AM
Asian.....in a Louisiana pond!
Please note: my images are not included in judging
Dan Brown
05-26-2009, 08:15 AM
Dave, this is fine tuned! Chop, calligraphy, color and placement look good and balanced. The chop could be centered under the cal. but when I use my chops, I often miss my mark and this is good, looks real! I only wish for more black within the image somehow, but it's very good as is:D.
Alfred Forns
05-26-2009, 09:41 AM
Really nice feel Dave I think the suggestion of more black is great !! ... nice stock image !!!!
Mark Fuge
05-26-2009, 09:41 AM
Dave,
Excellent image. I'm not a great Hi Key fan, but this is a very good one. I like it. ;)
Guess I will stay out of this weeks event! ;)
How much for a 40 x 60 print? :D ;)
Indranil Sircar
05-26-2009, 11:55 AM
Like this image a lot. Another vote for a bit more of black.
denise ippolito
05-26-2009, 01:30 PM
Dave, This has a very peaceful,serene look to it and I love the monochromatic feel to it. Maybe you could add another thin border of black around the entire image in an effort to add more black-I'd hate to see you loose the soft feel to this.
Fabs Forns
05-26-2009, 06:02 PM
Terrific presentation, the weeds are great and so is the whole package, very well done!
Dave Phillips
05-26-2009, 06:17 PM
Thank you for the comments friends
I have been working for an hour with more black and it just doesn't seem to work for me at this point.
Maybe if I totally started over, but moving on to the next one.
Anyone feel free to try the more black
This is a bit different:
http://i44.tinypic.com/2ms3i28.jpg
denise ippolito
05-26-2009, 06:22 PM
Dave, I would leave it as is-It's soft colored and soothing! I think it's great!!!
Dave Phillips
05-26-2009, 06:30 PM
Dave, I would leave it as is-It's soft colored and soothing! I think it's great!!!
I think you are right......less is more
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