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Rick Moran
05-15-2009, 05:23 AM
At the everglades. D2X w 600/4 and 14x. f4@1/2500, iso 320, EC 0. Thanks for looking, Rick

http://slopoki1.smugmug.com/photos/534351688_UNq5Z-L.jpg

Ed Cordes
05-15-2009, 09:41 AM
Great Actiona nd detail. I wish the head were not so blended with the left wing. But still an excellent image.

Axel Hildebrandt
05-15-2009, 10:12 AM
I like the stare and composition. It looks a bit flat on my monitor, maybe a slight contrast boost and lightening of the eye.

Desmond Chan
05-15-2009, 10:38 AM
It looks a bit flat on my monitor, maybe a slight contrast boost and lightening of the eye.

Same here. Kind of dark.

I would try to see if I could add some "light" to the head. Good pose and details.

Doug Brown
05-15-2009, 10:40 AM
Love the outstretched talons, but the image appears a bit dark and the bird's head gets a little lost in the wing. I think Axel makes some good suggestions on how to improve the image.

Randy Stout
05-15-2009, 01:07 PM
Rick:

I took everyone's suggestions and tweaked your image a bit. I was limited by the file size, but think it perked up a bit. Lightened the bird, brightened eye selectively, increased contrast of beak to help separate it.

See what you think.

Randy

Richard Peters
05-15-2009, 03:27 PM
Fantastic pose with the second image looking much better. The head does still blend in a 'tad' but thats just being picky really, everall a great shot!