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arash_hazeghi
05-12-2009, 02:51 AM
These Guys are so cute :D

http://www.stanford.edu/%7Eahazeghi/Photos/birds/DSC_0906_low.jpg

Shot in Palo Alto Baylands, CA

EXIF Information extracted from file:
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DateTimeOriginal: 2009:04:10 18:23:15
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Camera Make: NIKON CORPORATION
Camera Model: NIKON D700
Exposure Time: 1/1600.0 seconds
FNumber: 7.1
ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 500
Exposure Program: Aperture priority
ExposureBiasValue: +-1 2/3
MaxApertureValue: 5.7
MeteringMode: multi-segment
Flash: Flash did not fire
FocalLength: 420.0 mm
Software: Capture NX2

Daniel Cadieux
05-12-2009, 06:36 AM
Nice! Beautiful light you had, and you have two perfect poses. Minor tweaks to improve the image: CW rotation, good crop from the bottom (close to half of it), and toning down the dark line above the right bird's back. Well done on the techs :-)

Axel Hildebrandt
05-12-2009, 10:06 AM
Light, details and head angles look good. I would go for a tighter crop and a lower angle would have helped in this setting. I wish there were no shadow of the bird on the left on the other one.

arash_hazeghi
05-12-2009, 12:46 PM
thanks guys, if I go tighter on the bottom the reflection from the birds will be clipped, do you think that is OK?

arash_hazeghi
05-12-2009, 12:54 PM
BTW, how come the thumbnail is black?

Stu Bowie
05-12-2009, 01:13 PM
Sweet light on both of them, and like the raised foot from the guy at the back. I would also crop quite a bit off the bottom, and agree a CW rotation is needed.

arash_hazeghi
05-13-2009, 02:37 AM
Thanks guys, I updated the photo with all the comments incorporated.