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stuart wanuck
05-07-2009, 04:18 PM
nikon d 700 300 mm lens
iso 400 1600 @ 8 manual

David Thomasson
05-07-2009, 04:22 PM
A+. Great composition and interaction. I like that the sticks and twigs repeat the color from the underside of the beaks. Wonderful job!

Don Lacy
05-07-2009, 04:31 PM
Love the interaction between the birds along with the comp and nice lighting, While I expect some convergence with the subject and branches in this type of image I do find the one seeming to grow out of the second Herons back A bit distracting.

Axel Hildebrandt
05-07-2009, 04:43 PM
I like the interaction, poses and setting. Maybe a slight crop off the top. There are some artifacts in the sky, maybe due to jpg compression.

susanschermer
05-07-2009, 04:43 PM
Hi Stuart. It was a pleasure to meet you this past weekend. I see the two chicks at Wako are getting bigger and cutting up on the nest. I like the way the cypress have leafed out and add so much to the image.
Great interaction. I have mixed feelings about the leaf on top of the back. I might try getting rid of it and seeing if it improves.

Nicki Gwynn Jones
05-07-2009, 04:46 PM
Hi Stuart,
Lovely action shot - I would crop some from the bottom of the picture.
Best,
Nicki

stuart wanuck
05-07-2009, 04:51 PM
Hi Stuart. It was a pleasure to meet you this past weekend. I see the two chicks at Wako are getting bigger and cutting up on the nest. I like the way the cypress have leafed out and add so much to the image.
Great interaction. I have mixed feelings about the leaf on top of the back. I might try getting rid of it and seeing if it improves.
ps already removed the branch

stuart wanuck
05-07-2009, 04:52 PM
ps already removed the branch and will crop thanks

Fabs Forns
05-07-2009, 05:36 PM
Nice interaction of the twins, Stuart. It could go a little lighter on the sky. Branch is OK with me.

David Thomasson
05-08-2009, 08:13 PM
Experimenting with Fabs' suggestion for the sky. I like it.

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