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Haim Ziv
04-20-2009, 12:52 PM
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Mark II 600mm 1/1250 f7.1 ISO200 WH morning time.
Add some canvas at the bottom.
BeeEater's season start in Israel.

Thank you for looking.

Stu Bowie
04-20-2009, 02:03 PM
You have exposed the colours on the BE nicely, and like how the head follows the perch. Comp wise, I would maybe move him to the left.

Daniel Cadieux
04-20-2009, 04:31 PM
Overall pretty nice, but I would prefer the comp as a vertical. In this orientation the subject would need to be smaller in the frame or in a different, less erect pose (and yes further to the left) as it is too tight top and bottom. Amazingly beautiful colours on this guy...WOW!

Kim Rollins
04-20-2009, 05:46 PM
Wonderful colors.
Beautiful capture here.

Left shift may be good.
Seems to be a 'dust spot' or something directly to birds left in bg that for me is a distraction.

Mark Dumbleton
04-21-2009, 08:23 AM
Like this, super BG and colours of the bird. Comp needs a little attention, crop as a vertical or try moving the bird to the left. Well done

Juan Aragonés
04-21-2009, 09:16 AM
I like the landscape composition, BG, ruffled feathers and color bvut the bird is a bit centered in the frame to my taste Haim

Chris Hansen
04-21-2009, 06:05 PM
Haim,

I love the OOF background. The head angle on the bird is great. Would have a little more appeal if the head angle was just a few degrees more towards you. I lthink the detail in the feathers and the color saturation are wonderful. . Love the lighting and the pose. Excellent job. You might possibly think about cropping this into a vertical

God bless,

Chris