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JB Ellis
04-04-2009, 09:29 PM
I though this boat looked nice but felt like the shot needed to be just the boat and the water, nothing else. What do you think?

David Thomasson
04-04-2009, 11:34 PM
I though this boat looked nice but felt like the shot needed to be just the boat and the water, nothing else. What do you think?

I think you're exactly right. I like it very much. Pleasing composition.

Dave Mills
04-04-2009, 11:47 PM
Hi JB, I have many shots like that and find that simpler very often can be best and most powerful.

Stuart Frohm
04-05-2009, 05:42 AM
This is classic. Well seen. Well captured. Thanks for posting it.

Hazel Grant
04-05-2009, 11:57 AM
I also love it in its simplicity, but also that the boat is not centered vertically. Gives it somewhere to go. Centered would IMHO lend the shot to be more of a like-all-the-others stock look. Great shot

Dennis "Curly" Buchner
04-05-2009, 08:25 PM
Awesome composition, thanks for sharing

Robert Amoruso
04-06-2009, 05:50 AM
Works perfect JB. A very sellable image too.

Paul Marcellini
04-06-2009, 04:59 PM
Really nice comp and mood to this. I might pop the colors a touch and even raise exposure a hair. I threw it in cs3 and did auto levels just to see, this is what I got. YOu also need to work on the cloning on the right of the boat. Otherwise, wonderful image.

Fabs Forns
04-06-2009, 05:27 PM
Simplicity at its best. I like the colors in the repost.

Robert Amoruso
04-06-2009, 11:02 PM
Can definitely see the difference in Paul's repost JB. I have been posting in the mornings from a laptop and not really seeing the tonal quality of the images. I like what Paul did and would have suggested that myself.

Roman Kurywczak
04-08-2009, 07:22 PM
Hey JB,
Sweet!.....the simplicity is very effective. A classic! I actually like both versions....as darker original.....appeals to me......but sometimes...the softer re-post.....works too. A winner either way!

Bryan Hix
04-08-2009, 07:55 PM
JB, I love the simplicity and I also like the re-post better. Do you have you EXIF info as well? Just curious to see it. Thx.

JB Ellis
04-09-2009, 06:40 PM
Bryan, the details are Canon 20d, f8, ISO 800, 1/400. These are not my ideal choices, just where the camera was set. I think ISO 100 and a corresponding slower shutter speed might have been better, but since I was handholding, there might have been some shake. Didn't expect much, only took a couple of images, then when I got home this turned out to be one of my favorites from the outing. Isn't that how it always happens? Hope this helps.

Bryan Hix
04-09-2009, 07:32 PM
Thanks JB, that does help. Just curious. I really like the image. For me, it's a wall-hanger! :)

Richard Lovison
04-15-2009, 06:53 PM
I like the mood of the image as presented along with the composition. Maybe a tad more contrast and a bit of cleanup. It looks like it was captured during the "magic hour" that seems to be the craze and the auto levels just turned it into a 12 noon daylight shot.