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Mike Lentz
04-01-2009, 02:15 PM
Okay, had a few different views and head turns on this guy and I recently posted a different one of this same bird. If you remember the other photo, does this one work better? The only thing I was considering doing is adding some canvas up top to balance the comp.

http://www.pbase.com/mike_lentz/image/110820810.jpg

Nikon D300 ~ Nikkor 300mm F/2.8 with 1.4x TC
ISO 400 ~ F/4 ~ 1/2000 sec ~ -1/3 EV ~ Gitzo tripod

Daniel Cadieux
04-01-2009, 02:52 PM
Mike, I prefer this one. I agree with more room at top. I'd crop about half the space between tail and edge, then add the equivalent above. Cool pose with the flared tail!

Lowell Sims
04-01-2009, 03:09 PM
I like this one too and agree with Daniel on cropping from left and adding to top. What about cropping the bottom just a bit to eliminate the "black hole" in the perch? It'll be tighter at the bottom but every time I look at the photo my eye is drawn to that area.

denise ippolito
04-01-2009, 03:38 PM
I like this pose alot and agree more room at top. Lovely details and complimentary BG!!

Steve Maxson
04-01-2009, 04:30 PM
Cool pose, Mike. This looks good except for tinkering with the crop as suggested above.

Randy Stout
04-01-2009, 05:52 PM
Mike:
One more vote for a different crop. I might be tempted to convert to a vertical crop, with more room at the top, and the bill pointing up towards the URC. Give him some room to look into, and I think it would be effective. If he was looking straight to the right, then the horizontal would perhaps be a better choice.

Good technicals,love the yellow under the tail.

Randy

Randy

Ramon M. Casares
04-01-2009, 06:10 PM
I got lost on that wonderfull yellow tail, I didn't know it was yellow, lovely pose, BG, light, detail and colors, I could've worked also as a vertical IMO. But love it as presented! COngratulaitons!

Mike Lentz
04-01-2009, 06:15 PM
Okay guys, once again I appreciate the feedback. Kinda what I was thinking as far as adding canvas up top. Thanks for commenting!:)

Ákos Lumnitzer
04-01-2009, 06:31 PM
I really like the BG and the fanned tail! It is a gorgeous bird.

Maxis Gamez
04-01-2009, 07:00 PM
Hi,

Another vote for more room at the bottom. Good exposure and looks very sharp!

Mike Lentz
04-01-2009, 07:06 PM
I really like the BG and the fanned tail! It is a gorgeous bird.

Here is how a good friend desribed this image to me....
Looks like the ballerina with her fancy polka dot blouse and yellow skirt, and black lobster bib on :p

Ákos Lumnitzer
04-01-2009, 07:40 PM
Yes Mike. It really does. That's a fab description! :) Ta. = Thanks in OZ. ;)

Stu Bowie
04-02-2009, 01:59 AM
Excellent detail captured here, and what a superb OOF BG. Great image Mike.