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Tom Walter
03-31-2009, 08:48 PM
Here's another view from Steptoe Butte taken in the late afternoon. I tried to place the buildings in the upper left third and the plowed field in the lower right third. Your comments are welcome.

Nikon D200
Nikon 70-300 4.5-5.6G VR at 65mm
Tripod
1/100 sec at f8
ISO 200<O:p</O:p

Robert Amoruso
04-01-2009, 08:17 AM
Tom,

I am liking the comp here a lot. You looked at the edges for protrusions and limited them and composed it nicely. I don't think including more at the bottom would have been better but I think including the dark green hill in the FG all the way along the bottom edge would have been good (look at LR corner). You have a few small protrusions (left edge near top and right edge near bottom) that can be cloned out.

Roman Kurywczak
04-03-2009, 02:52 PM
Hi Tom,
You are getting some nice undulations and shadow play with these images. I'm debating the lighter band along the top of frame and removing it at least 2/3 of the way to the right......would further strengthen the comp IMO. Way to use the late light also.