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José Rodríguez
03-14-2009, 09:06 AM
Maspalomas
Edited with Capture NX , nikkor 55-200 VR handheld,
<table id="Inbox" cellspacing="0" width="100%"><tbody><tr><td style="font-size: 120%;" width="30%">Cámara:</td> <td style="font-size: 120%;">Nikon D40 (http://www.flickr.com/cameras/nikon/d40/)</td> </tr> <tr> <td style="font-size: 120%;" width="30%">Exposición:</td> <td style="font-size: 120%;">0,003 sec (1/400)</td> </tr> <tr> <td style="font-size: 120%;" width="30%">Aperture:</td> <td style="font-size: 120%;">f/8</td> </tr> <tr> <td style="font-size: 120%;" width="30%">Lente:</td> <td style="font-size: 120%;">200 mm</td> </tr> <tr> <td>Velocidad ISO:</td> <td>200</td></tr></tbody></table>

http://gallery.photo.net/photo/8386840-lg.jpg

Rob Miner
03-14-2009, 01:15 PM
Hey Jose - I would have really enjoyed your photo if you had taken a few paces to the left. Keeping the boy on the right margin of the photo - seemingly to stare into the sunset. I would have tried cropping - leaving more room at the bottom any maybe less at the top.

Rob-----

Robert Amoruso
03-14-2009, 01:36 PM
Jose,

I am good with the crop but agree with Rob, moving left would have been the way to go with this.

David Thomasson
03-14-2009, 06:02 PM
A charming shot. I like the composition as is and would not have put the sun to the boy's left. The only thing that bothered me was the halo around the boy.

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/8494/halox.jpg

José Rodríguez
03-14-2009, 08:22 PM
David, you're night. I processed this one with Capture Nx some time ago. but I think I'll have to reprocess again avoiding that problem. Thanks for your comments !

Roman Kurywczak
03-15-2009, 10:24 AM
Hi Jose,
David did catch my thought on the halo and I too agree with Jeffrey and Robert on the 2 steps left would have made the image stronger. I do like the crop as presented.......and with the removal of the halo....this will be a nice image....even with the boy centered.

Arthur Morris
03-15-2009, 01:51 PM
Hey Joe, I am with David. I like the COMP exactly as is. It leads the viewer to think, "The sun is so pretty; he must be looking at something really interesting."