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stuart wanuck
03-05-2009, 08:00 AM
nikon d 300 300 mm iso 400 1225 ap at 6.1
sugggestion to improve..strong backlight should i have opened a stop and or fill flash?thanks

Randy Stout
03-05-2009, 08:05 AM
Stuart:

Nice bird, great wing spread, head angle, sharp.

Fill flash would have helped a lot, and you were close enough it would have been effective. THe bird needs more room to our right to flare into, and a bit more room at top so the wing tip is further from the edge.

Randy

Axel Hildebrandt
03-05-2009, 12:24 PM
Great pose, I'm surprised you can see the skin on the near wing. Yes to fill flash and I would give it more room on the right to fly into.

Judy Lynn Malloch
03-05-2009, 02:27 PM
Good timing and nice action captured in this one Stuart. I agree that more canvas to the right would strengthen this image.

Lance Peters
03-07-2009, 06:40 PM
Hi Stuart - agree with all of the above - more room in front for him to fly into would improve... Fill flash would have helped - like the pose and the details.