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Linda Holloway
02-11-2009, 08:37 PM
At the beach in Port St. Joe, Fl. Couldn't believe the pinks in the sky.

Rebel xti
1/6 at f/11
10mm
Ef-s 10-22
ISO 100

Comments please.

Linda Holloway

Robert Amoruso
02-11-2009, 09:09 PM
Hello Linda,

You had great light and some fantastic clouds. You have two strong diagonals in this image - the clouds and the shoreline - both helping to guide the eye into the image.

The sand FG I feel takes up too much space and diminishes the sky too much. I posted a recrop which takes the LL edge right to the shoreline. Having diagonals entering at the edges makes for a powerful compositional element.

I think your shutter speed was just right - you can see the form of the waves but it is softened due to the logn exposure. Nice work.

Linda Holloway
02-11-2009, 09:57 PM
Robert,

Thanks for your help. I will try the crop. I like it.

Linda

Roman Kurywczak
02-12-2009, 09:28 PM
Hi Linda,
Beautiful sunrise colors captured. I like robert's crop as it accentuates the curve of the clouds even more while minimizing the footprints. You live in a tough part of the US for landscapes.....so I really applaud your efforts to get out there early and create a very nice image!

Grady Weed
02-16-2009, 03:25 AM
Ditto Roman and Robert. Keep shooting.