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Guillermo Luis Cozzo
01-23-2008, 09:07 PM
Hi all...a few month ago I have tried this cloudscape in Santiago de Chile...the drawing made by those clouds in the sky took my atention...


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Thanks for your feedback & comments, really apreciated
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David Kennedy
01-23-2008, 09:47 PM
Guillermo,
While the clouds are certainly the subject of this image, I would argue that you still need to "ground" it with more of the dark foreground that you introduce at the very bottom of the frame.

Robert Amoruso
01-27-2008, 07:36 AM
I agree with David, a bit of the dark FG was needed here to keep it from being top-heavy. The clouds are fantastic.

Jason Hahn
01-27-2008, 07:42 AM
Building on what David and Robert said, I also think that one of the elements in the bottom corners needs to be more fully in the frame, both feel a little clipped. A slight pan left or right would pull either one more into the frame, and make them a more intesting part of your composition. The sky is incredible.

Jason