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Jeff Parker
01-21-2008, 09:30 PM
My wife loves this shot. Personally, I don't like that they are flying away. Comments?
EOS 5D, 600mm F4IS, 1/3200sec f/4, ISO 400

Doug Brown
01-22-2008, 12:16 AM
I like the overall color palette and it appears to be sharp. But I'm not crazy about the fact that the birds overlap one another, that they're flying away (no eye contact), and that the one on the left has its legs cut off. Just my 2 cents.

Axel Hildebrandt
01-22-2008, 01:14 PM
I like the setting and idea and agree with Doug's comments. Do you have a few frames of them flying toward you? Keep them coming.

Jeff Parker
01-22-2008, 05:39 PM
No, they were standing around and took off in this direction.

Jason Vaclavek
01-22-2008, 08:11 PM
I think some seperation between birds and a full bird at the end would make this one much stronger. I do like your vision behind it.