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denise ippolito
01-17-2009, 11:16 AM
Canon 5D
24-105mm
ISO 400
1/50 sec. at f/6.3
side window light

Gus Cobos
01-17-2009, 01:46 PM
Lady Denise,
I like your composition...I like the placement of the flower in the frame...I feel that it needs a little bit of light to show it's pretty colors...I cropped tighter and opened up the mid-tones slightly, also increased saturation by 1 percent and selective sharpened the contours on the main petals...see if you like...:):cool:

denise ippolito
01-17-2009, 02:33 PM
Thanks Gus! I like the lighter version.

Dave Mills
01-17-2009, 02:37 PM
Hi Denise...I like your composition and the way Gus lightened it. My only suggestion is you give it a bit more room on the left..

Ed Vatza
01-18-2009, 05:40 AM
Really like the composition Denise. Definitely headed in the right direction. I too felt it needed some brightening and Gus's touch-up helped a lot. Very good eye here.

Julie Kenward
01-18-2009, 03:40 PM
My thoughts exactly. Little bit of brightening, little bit of sharpening and a little more room on the left. Good eye on this composition, Denise.