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stuart wanuck
01-02-2009, 08:37 PM
nikon d 300 iso 400 80-400 mm lens 250 @ 5.6

Sid Garige
01-02-2009, 10:12 PM
Stuart,

Little more space on the left.

Juan Aragonés
01-03-2009, 04:28 AM
I agree with Sid about the need for more room. The Bg is a bit saturated to my taste but I love the green eye and the golden skin. Neat eye contact and very good textures. Try to desaturate the Bg a bit but keeping color in the bird using two different layers in PS. Stuart I do not know if this is a crop but if you have more space at the top of the frame I think that you could go for a vertical crop that may work nicely on this image :-)

Bogdan Coltea
01-03-2009, 04:33 AM
Agree with the above.
I'd also try to even out the tonality on the BKGR. It's a bit too contrasty for me.

Leroy Laverman
01-03-2009, 09:28 AM
I like the pose and agree with the others about pulling back the saturation and contrast, especially on the background.