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Todd Frost
12-10-2008, 10:09 PM
Adult beaver cleaning up a bit.
D300, 80-400vr @400, 1/200, f8, iso560, AV, matrix metering, 0 ev comp.

Thanks for looking, comments and critiques always appreciated.

Todd

Robert Amoruso
12-11-2008, 01:44 PM
Todd,

I like the beaver, side angle of the head and the paws up but the room on the right and bottom does not help the image IMO. I would crop from right and bottom. Leave more room on right then on left about a 1/3 to 2/3 ratio.

Art Kornienko
12-11-2008, 08:04 PM
I find the background too close to the beaver and isolation of the subjects is difficult. I guess there isn't much of an option with this type of shot. Sharpness is very nice.

Sabyasachi Patra
12-11-2008, 11:29 PM
Todd,
I agree with the previous suggestions. A slight crop at the bottom would be better. Some space at the top would have been nice. Do you have a vertical?
Cheers,
Sabyasachi

Todd Frost
12-12-2008, 12:40 AM
Thanks for the suggestions and comments. I do have more room with this image and many others of this adult and of the kit in both horizontal and vertical.

Todd

Alfred Forns
12-12-2008, 09:12 AM
Agree with suggestions and particularly like the shadow detail. Ratio was i like Robert's idea, downloaded the image to physically see and does look good !! Still have room for the little guy to look into.

Steve Canuel
12-12-2008, 07:51 PM
Really like the pose and the habitat inclusion. The texture/color of the fur doesn't provide much seperation from the BG (good for him, bad for us). He's a chunky one.

Charles Glatzer
12-16-2008, 04:17 PM
Todd,

Love it!

Chas