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Jackie Schuknecht
11-26-2008, 09:59 PM
Yes it is a bird.:D
I took this one in the spring at a wildlife center. This poor fellow can't fly, but he is very friendly and inquisitive and is well cared for.
20D
0EV
f/8
ISO 400
1/1600s
100-400 @400
Tripod
Full frame, no cropping or straightening
Used sharpening technique pointed out to me by Robert Amoruso select bird/contract/ and feather and then sharpened using Smart Sharpen
Did a NR on the BG
And cloned the BG around the beak because there were some distracting darker green spots
C & C appreciated
Thanks

Alfred Forns
11-26-2008, 10:32 PM
He does look like a real character Jackie !!!!

I like the fine detail and excellent bg Nice shadow detail btw might take a little of the left? Curious to see what others think !! Excellent !!!

Gus Cobos
11-26-2008, 10:34 PM
Nicely done Jackie,
I like the pale green background which makes your subject stand out. You have good color rendition and sharp details. Suggestion, sharpen the eye just a tad and make it a hair darker...:cool:

Oscar Zangroniz
11-26-2008, 10:58 PM
I like the fine details and eye contact on this guy Jackie. I'm not sure of the composition, might agree with Al regarding taking a little from the left.
Regards

denise ippolito
11-26-2008, 11:27 PM
Jackie, He looks sweet!-good color in BG -crop looks fine to me- I'd have to see another to decide-but good job on the exposure

Jeni Williams
11-26-2008, 11:28 PM
Nice detail and bg Jackie! Think I agree with Al re the crop.

Lance Peters
11-27-2008, 01:07 AM
Hi - Agree with AL on the crop - also with Gus on the eye comments :)

Jackie Schuknecht
11-27-2008, 09:45 AM
Eye darkened and sharpened (Thanks Gus), cropping from the left looked odd to me so I cropped a bit from the top and right. If any one else has any ideas for a crop please post or let me know if you think this looks OK. Thanks!

Harold Davis
11-27-2008, 10:02 AM
well, jackie, i totally changed it!! i darkened the bg a little and thought the bird popped more. cropped, sharpened the eye and beak and toned down the whites just a hair. i dont know if it's any better. just different!!

Jackie Schuknecht
11-27-2008, 10:10 AM
Thanks Harold for the ideas, think I like your crop better and good idea about darkening the BG. Thanks!!!!!

denise ippolito
11-27-2008, 02:07 PM
Jackie-I almost forgot-Happy Thanksgiving!!!!