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Dave Phillips
11-23-2008, 06:08 PM
zoom, zoom, he was just checking me out......kept on going.
The reflecting colored cypress trees made for a colorful bg

400mm f/5.6L, f/8, 1/640, ISO 640, +.33EC
thank you for critique/comment

Doug Brown
11-23-2008, 06:13 PM
Lovely water and great eye contact. The crop could be improved upon by adding a little canvas up top, on the right, and on the left. As presented, the bird sits too high in the frame, is a little crowded in the rear, and has nowhere to swim to.

Axel Hildebrandt
11-23-2008, 08:04 PM
I like the 'turbo' pose, details and water colors and agree that a slightly wider crop would make it even better.

Fabs Forns
11-23-2008, 09:46 PM
Another vote for wider, but lovely colors, exposure and light. Water is great!