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mikedelaney
11-20-2008, 10:48 AM
canon 40D
sigma 50-500mm
f 6.3
1/1000 s.
ISO 400

i tried to put a sky blue behind it, but some of the cockiness was left behind so i give you it with the actual camera bg.:o

mikedelaney
11-20-2008, 10:49 AM
the one with the blue bg went through, the one with the actual bg failed, i don't know why.

Gus Cobos
11-20-2008, 07:24 PM
Hi Mike,
A much better and cleaner background...you have good head angle and eye contact ....your Cardinal is too centered in frame and sitting way too high. I made a few changes to your base image to show you what I mean...I cropped the bottom and from the right side of the frame and added canvas to the left to move him off center and place him further down. I increased saturation and contrast and selective sharpened the eye...see if you agree... :cool:

Alfred Forns
11-20-2008, 09:14 PM
Bg is fine Mike !!! I like the changes Gus made, main thing is keeping the bird form the middle. Doing well !!!

mikedelaney
11-20-2008, 09:20 PM
thanks Gus, i do certainly agree that you made some real improvements over my shot. i'll do better tomorrow.
thans to you too Alfred.

denise ippolito
11-20-2008, 11:07 PM
Mike, They get better and better.Good Job! Beautiful BG

Jeni Williams
11-21-2008, 08:56 AM
What beautiful colours Mike. I like the pose and bg - and think Gus has done some super pp work!!

Jackie Schuknecht
11-21-2008, 10:33 AM
Good work Mike, you sure are trying hard. Gus' repost is great.