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Tomas Calle
11-13-2008, 12:04 PM
Hi,
This is a visitor of my back garden feeders. Comments and critiques will be welcome.
Regards
MKIII, EF 500mm f/4 IS USM, 1.4 x,
f/5.6 at 1/125 sec in AV mode,
Evaluative metering,
ISO 400,
on tripod.

Daniel Cadieux
11-13-2008, 12:21 PM
Cute little fella, and I like the curious pose. The orange spot above the head is quite distracting, and I would tone down the perch. Another round of USM on and around the eye would be good. Keep them coming Tomas! :-)

Tony Whitehead
11-13-2008, 12:38 PM
Cute pose. Daniel has covered all the issues well. More DOF would be nice but it looks like you were battling for light.

Stephen Stephen
11-13-2008, 12:53 PM
Tomas I like the pose of this little fellow. In addition to Dan's comments I might be tempted to crop some of the top of the frame. There seems a lot of unused space above the bird.

Arthur Morris
11-13-2008, 02:37 PM
A repost...

Tomas Calle
11-13-2008, 02:44 PM
Thank you for your comments and help.
Best regards

Daniel Cadieux
11-13-2008, 08:07 PM
Moving the orange spot rather than eliminating it was a nice touch by Artie...good thinking!

Axel Hildebrandt
11-13-2008, 10:59 PM
Cute pose and pretty bird. I agree with Daniel's suggestions but also like Artie's crop idea.