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Jim Crosswell
10-28-2008, 11:39 AM
This is a shot from my backyard feeding station.

Aidan Briggs
10-28-2008, 09:02 PM
Nice pose. The bird is a bit centered for my tastes. I would also apply some sharpening.

P.S. When posting include the techs so we can give better critiques.

Alfred Forns
10-28-2008, 09:25 PM
Big Welcome JIm !!!!

Great suggestions Aidan I'm sure the original is plenty sharp, might give it a slightly more USM, will turn fine. Mostly square crops are not all that attractive but this is not bad Agree it would look better with a little more room up front !! Processing wise I would brighten the bird more Looking forward to more !!! btw don't forget the tech info !!

Lana Hays
10-30-2008, 10:32 AM
Welcome, Jim
Good suggestions. Wonderful perky pose......especially the eye contact and raised crest. Just needs a bit more USM. The square crop is ok for this composition but I'm not a big fan of that crop. Well done.

Raymond Barlow
10-30-2008, 10:15 PM
welcome Jim, good to see you in here., and looking fwd to more of you awesome images.