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Paul Pagano
09-11-2008, 07:17 PM
Not sure what I think about this one yet. I like the colors and the flow of the water away but not sure if maybe I composed in too much silhouetted marsh. Maybe not. (This is about 60-80 degrees left of "Twilight on the Saint Johns River" several minutes later)

Canon 40D
Sigma 30mm f/1.4
ISO200 f/4 1/60s Monopod
LR 2.0/boosted colors, saturation and some NR
Framing in MS Digital Image

Robert Amoruso
09-12-2008, 07:02 AM
Paul,

I really like the sky and the colors but agree with you that the FG silhouette is too large - it draws the eye in too much. I suggest a crop that has the water on the right entering the corner of the image. I tried it and it looks good and really accentuates the water and sky colors.

Paul Pagano
09-13-2008, 08:25 AM
Thanks, Robert. I tried it also and I agree.

Roman Kurywczak
09-13-2008, 10:37 PM
Hi Paul,
IMO going for a pano crop of the bottom will kepp the intent and feel of the image there.....yet eliminate the stong FG silhouette presence in the presentation. This will balance well with the clouds of the right.