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SC Fang
01-13-2008, 05:40 PM
Here is an image of Brown Shrike to share and hope to hear feedbacks and critiques to help me improve.


1D2 500mm 1.4xTC ISO400 f/8 1/640s beanbag


Thanks.
SC

George DeCamp
01-13-2008, 06:05 PM
Hi scf!

First welcome to BPN!! Also can you send a PM to Alfred Forns with your full name so he can change your scf to your real name? Thanks!

Now, this image is sweet!!! The BG is beautiful and the bird is exquisite, love the colors and the perch. Frankly I am not so sure you can do much to improve this image, at least from my point of view maybe a little more room around the bird is all I can see but that is dependent on the viewer. You did very well!!!

Judd Patterson
01-13-2008, 06:47 PM
Ah, yes, you do have a beauty here! I particularly like the way that the background compliments the bird and the incredible sharpness that you achieved. It looks great to me too!

SC Fang
01-13-2008, 07:49 PM
Thanks George & Judd for your comments.

I just PMed Al to change my nicks to full name.

Cheers,
SC

Nonda Surratt
01-13-2008, 08:38 PM
A really lovely bird, well exposed and sharp. I might wish for a bit more room,very minor wish:-)

Axel Hildebrandt
01-13-2008, 08:52 PM
Welcome to BPN! I like it a lot, just a bit tight in the frame.

Philippe Collard
01-17-2008, 05:27 PM
Hello SC,

This is a beautiful photograph. I love the warm tones overall, the super clean golden background and the delicate perch. The bird has plenty of details and the pose is perfect. As the others said I would give it a bit more room to breathe next time ;)

Cheers,

Philippe.