Conjoiners

[Janet Leigh]

Mother Nature's work
Gerber daisys in full bloom
Is it one or two?

[Lance Warley]

A legitimate question. I'm asking myself, "How can you get some contrast, some drama into the words?"

A simile or a metaphor or a reflective thought would go a long way here, Janet. You might also consider writing something from the daisy's (or should I say "daisys' '"?) perspective.

Thanks for posting this. I think there's more here. I hope you repost another try.

[Janet Leigh]

Lance..Heres a different view.

Our inner struggle
Knowing what's right and what's wrong
Which way shall we go?

[Lance Warley]

Now you're jammim'!

Way to kick it up a notch, Janet :)

[James Shadle]

Lovers,
United by a multiplicity of desires.
Divided by a common goal.

[Lance Warley]

That's a home run, James!

You wrote a book with 12 words.