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Jeni Williams
09-02-2008, 09:28 AM
After this I sincerely hope that darn cl. stamp gets permanently stuck!!!!:(:(

Canon 40D Focal length 420mm
F/5.6
Exp time 1/800sec
Exp comp. -1step.

Julie Kenward
09-02-2008, 10:11 AM
Nice one, Jeni! I would have liked to have seen a little further down on the flower and a little less above the bird's head. You also have a few hot spots in the white areas - shooting your photos in Raw format will help you to recover those and tone them back down. Overall it's a very pleasing image. The bird's pose it gorgeous and very original!

Gus Cobos
09-02-2008, 03:18 PM
Hi Jeni,
I like your capture and image, I see that the bird is over sharpened and the eye does not look natural. Try to selective sharpen instead of an over all general sharpening...:cool:

Harold Davis
09-02-2008, 05:12 PM
i love the compo here!! only wished that all of the flower was included. tone down the hotspots and i think you have a nice keeper!!

Lisa Williams
09-02-2008, 05:36 PM
Jeni, is this a redo of "Mousebird Challenge"? If so you've done some excellent PP work here. I never would have had the patience. And if it's not I still like it a lot. Will leave the critiquing on this to better minds.

Lance Peters
09-02-2008, 10:55 PM
Hi Jeni - well done - few points worth correcting as above - but job well done :)

Alfred Forns
09-03-2008, 07:35 PM
Agree with previous points and the over sharpening seems to be the most damaging !!! Can't wait to see the next one, they are such cool birds !!!