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Jeroentje
08-18-2008, 08:05 AM
Here it is then my first photo on this forum
http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/nn82/Jeroendewit/Aalscholver.jpg
Markus Jais
08-18-2008, 10:01 AM
I like that one. the composition is good. Light is also very good. no hard contrasts.
I would prefer a more blured water. Here I find it a little distracting from the bird.
Which focal lenght did you use?
Markus
Jeroentje
08-18-2008, 10:19 AM
15x zoom but i don't no the focal lenght
Markus Jais
08-18-2008, 11:09 AM
15x zoom but i don't no the focal lenght
if you use Lightroom or Adobe Camera Raw, you should see the focal length in the metadata. At least if you shoot raw. I don't know if every camera adds this to jpegs.
Markus
Fabs Forns
08-18-2008, 06:24 PM
Hey Jeroen, very nice as presented, good composition!
We can help you better if you post the techs of the image.
Keep them coming!
Lana Hays
08-18-2008, 06:27 PM
Jeroen
Welcome. I like the Cormorant. Nice composition and good exposure. I, too think that if the water were blurred more it would be better. Posting the techs will help with the critique.
Jeroentje
08-19-2008, 05:43 AM
My camera has no RAW settings so all my photo's ar in JPEG's, My camera is a Sony DSC H7
Alfred Forns
08-19-2008, 07:27 AM
Hi Jeroen
Do like the composition and don't mind the bg water at all. Would like to see the bird a bit lighter in the shadow areas and the head angle is marginal. Seems to be looking away a bit? Mighty fine and looking forward to many more !!!
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