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Aristotle Georgiou
07-31-2008, 07:39 AM
Fine-leaf Bush-pea (Pultenacea stipularis)

Hi to all, this was taken a few weeks back. I did my best with removing the noise as I've just recently started learning how to use noise ninja.

All comments and help are appreciated.

D200
300f/4
1/10's
f/10
ISO 640
Built in flash used

Roman Kurywczak
07-31-2008, 12:07 PM
Hi Aristotle,
I like the little spot of light highlighting the bud.For me a little crop off the bottom and right.........to put the bud closer to one of the Rule of thirds position........would minimize distractions more while still keep the feeling of the spines.

Julie Kenward
07-31-2008, 01:52 PM
I agree with Roman. Put that bud more in the bottom right quadrant and it will really help the composition. You did a really nice job of exposure to get that twinkle of light on the bud.

Ed Vatza
07-31-2008, 07:02 PM
Hi Aristotle,

Interesting subject. I think I'd like to see it placed deeper in the LR corner and cropped to a landscape rather than portrait.

Aristotle Georgiou
08-01-2008, 04:51 AM
Thanks for your kind comments and help with improvements.

Mike Moats
08-01-2008, 05:32 AM
Hey Aristotle, very good details and interesting subject. Agree on the Romans crop.

Aristotle Georgiou
08-02-2008, 01:11 AM
Thanks Mike.

Cheers
Ari