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Michael Pancier
07-31-2008, 05:37 AM
Another water lily from Fairchild Tropical Gardens in Miami.

I burned out all background objects to make it go black.

40d + Sigma 150mm 2.8 Macro + Sigma 1.4x tc
f/11
1/200
ISO 800 (dunno how this happened)
-1 Ev
tripod

Roman Kurywczak
07-31-2008, 12:02 PM
Hi Michael,
Black BG's are a very subjective choice......but in some cases I do like it and this one works for me. I think a little lean to the plant and a bit more of a peek into the lilly would help a bit compositionally as now it is quite centered.

Julie Kenward
07-31-2008, 01:54 PM
I'd slice a bit off the bottom - just below where you lose all detail in the stem. I do love the way it all melts away into nothingness and those two bottom side petals are so nicely lit!

Ed Vatza
07-31-2008, 06:56 PM
I do like the flower but I agree that there seems to be a bit too much stem (for me) in this image. Also while I sometimes like a black background, I find myself looking for some color in the background here.

Paul Marcellini
07-31-2008, 10:36 PM
Since it is a black background, I think adding canvas for height and maybe cropping some off the sides might work. I like it, simple and effective.

Bruce Murden
07-31-2008, 10:56 PM
The think I like most about this image is its successful play of color and dark in a high contrast shooting situation. Nice job in tough lighting! I agree the crop can favor this image more, but I'm fine with the vertical stem on this one since you have good negative space to support the bloom (but I often like more negative space than others do)