calm waters

[Volkan Akgul]

195340
merhaba
sakin ve keyifli bir an

sonya1-mc11-400f4 do2
1/1500 - f4 - iso500
saygılar.

[Volkan Akgul]

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The whiteness on the bird front in the first image has been removed.

[Jonathan Ashton]

Pleasant image but I feel the bird is slightly too far to the left and rather small in the frame.

[Andreas Liedmann]

I do like the concept .... but the bird is placed on the " wrong side " of the frame , at least IMHO. But tastes do vary ....

TFS Andreas

[kevin Hice]

Interesting Comments Volkan, that is the first thing I noticed is how far the bird is to the left. But then I thought it was a nice touch to show the trailing ripples. So I am fine with that aspect of the image. I find the background colors just superb and very calming. I would maybe move the duck higher in the image. TFS

[Volkan Akgul]

Hi guys, thanks Jon.
Andreas, sure, but Kevin's opinion outweighs.


I thought like a wave created by a bird, the distance traveled is too much. Age 42 bought the return ticket, I don't know if I will live as long as Arthur :)

[Daniel Cadieux]

I find it rather artistic, and like it. Very dreamy. I prefer the second version with the yellow blob removed, but now the blue extends too low in that spot.

[William Dickson]

RP for me.....The length of the trailing ripples adds to the dreamy feel....Nice one

Will

[Arthur Morris]

I like the idea of a "wake" shot. A pano crop might work well. I also like the soft light and the dreamy colors.

with love, a

[Volkan Akgul]

Thanks, every criticism is taken into account.