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dankearl
05-17-2022, 10:11 AM
D500, 500pf, f5.6, 1/1000, iso900
Taken on the Oregon Coast in Yachats, Oregon.
wcsparBP.jpg (http://www.birdphotographers.net/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=193401&stc=1&d=1652800237)

Randy Stout
05-18-2022, 08:37 AM
Dan"

That is one dramatic perch for the sparrow! Sharp, well exposed.

The oof vegetation on the left is somewhat distracting. Perhaps you could soften it a bit more, esp. the part closest to the bird. The image is well worth a bit of tinkering if you wanted to.\!

Randy

Dorian Anderson
05-20-2022, 07:11 AM
Great perch, pose, and processing, but the OOF bit behind is rough. There's also a lot of room above the bird, but I think you probably wanted to included the whole OOF bit as cutting it off would be wors

Arthur Morris
05-20-2022, 08:03 AM
The sparrow and the perch (flower?) are great, but ... If you could have taken a small step to your left you could have separated the bird from the o-o-f stuff ... Lots could be done after that. Or not.

with love, artie

Arthur Morris
05-20-2022, 08:30 AM
I should have asked -- was this at a set-up? Was audio used?

with love, artie