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David Pugsley
07-01-2021, 11:13 AM
1/1600
f/9
ISO 2500
Sony a1 w/ 200-600 and 1.4x @ 840mm

I typically see the marbled godwits tuck away their raised foot. However, this one delicately displayed it reminding me of the yoga tree pose.

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Brian Sump
07-01-2021, 06:40 PM
David, gorgeous canvas man. The pastel color striations going horizontally through are fantastic and you can't find a cooler pose than tucked in with the foot lift.

I can appreciate the composition and love the soft, even light.

The biggest concern I have is the head does not appear as sharp and in focus as the raised foot. Not sure if the camera grabbed the foot or what but maybe worth a look to see where the focus point was and/or give some selective sharpening to the head?

Overall, a beaut!

arash_hazeghi
07-01-2021, 11:43 PM
love the soft colors, I agree the image is soft as posted, everything looks soft to me, it has nothing to do with focus I think you just forgot to apply sharpening after you resized it for web. too much room on the right

TFS

here is a quick try


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Krishna Prasad kotti
07-02-2021, 01:26 AM
Excellent colors and simple image design. Sharpened image in the repost looks nice.

No problem with space all round in my opinion.

TFS

Colin Driscoll
07-02-2021, 05:05 AM
Beautiful tones and Arash has improved the soft focus issue.
Raised and exposed foot is great. Framing isn't quite right to me either.

Wayne Niz
07-02-2021, 05:42 AM
Arash RP is definitely better, but colors are awesome well done great capture

David Pugsley
07-02-2021, 08:58 AM
Arash nailed it, I forgot to sharpen after the resize. [emoji2957] Thanks all for the input.


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Arthur Morris
07-05-2021, 12:06 PM
You gotta love low. The pastel tones and layers of color are tan-fastic. Good job on the JPEG sharpening by Arash but I love the placement of the subject and the image design. IOW, the amount of room on our right is perfect.

with love, artie

Anthony Barsotti
07-07-2021, 01:59 PM
This is a stunner, love the perspective and those tones in the background are gorgeous. Only thing I noticed besides the sharpening that Arash already pointed out is that there seems to be a bit of blue fringing on front of the leg its standing on. Other than that really nice work here!

John Mack
07-20-2021, 06:56 PM
Nice low angle and those color tones and gradients in the background. Really nice view of the near leg/foot.