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Eric Patdu
05-11-2021, 09:39 PM
Portrait of an Angry Grackle
Common Grackle
Shooting Info: Canon EOS 7D II + EF 500mm f/4L IS II, f/8, 1/100 sec, ISO 1600, +1 EV
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arash_hazeghi
05-12-2021, 12:49 AM
nice look down the barrel and open bill plus the iridescent colors are nice as well.
The face looks a bit crunchy on my screen, the BG is a bit distracting and also noisy/grainy. I wish you had shot from slightly higher angle. the composition is too centered and too much empty space IMO. I'd present this as a portrait.
TFS
Arthur Morris
05-12-2021, 05:10 PM
Hi Eric,
This one is close, but. I like the singing pose. The biggest problem is the white area directly behind the bird's head. If you could have moved a yard or two to your left, you might have avoided that. And depending on the situation, striating with a vertical might have made it easier to create a pleasing composition. As is, it is awkward. Lets see some more!
with love, artie
John Mack
05-12-2021, 06:37 PM
Fits the theme very well. Neat how you can see inside the mouth.
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