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Volkan Akgul
04-03-2021, 06:33 AM
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hi,
Mk3 - Canon800mm f5.6
1/1000 f5.6 iso400
criticism and opinions are appreciated. to your liking
Jonathan Ashton
04-03-2021, 07:00 AM
Very nice indeed, I really like the colours and plumage details, the lores look good too. The pose with the delicately placed foot is appealing.
Whilst I think the crop is "OK" I feel the image is a little too tall.
Volkan Akgul
04-03-2021, 07:35 AM
thanks Jon,
I shot with 1dmk3 10mp. It creates problems if I do not keep the field of view wide. You added value. Maybe I could shine a little more light, that's my only contradiction
dankearl
04-03-2021, 02:29 PM
I would sharpen this a bit more. Exposure looks good.
Daniel Cadieux
04-03-2021, 03:14 PM
Very appealing! Good look-back pose. Excellent background. I like the thorns on the perch. The white spot on the bill should go IMO - patch tool or content aware would work well for that.
Brian Sump
04-03-2021, 04:58 PM
Volkan, personally I love this composition. It's different and the way you positioned the subject and the branch work very well :-)
Beautiful even light, great look back by the sparrow and I am so glad you found some leaves on the perch. The background is killer.
I agree, just a bit more sharpening on the subject would help.
Really nice!!
Volkan Akgul
04-04-2021, 05:25 AM
thanks friends, feedback is valuable
I have never used sea bass to this day Brian, ethics are not covered here. I can use it after that :)
John Mack
04-08-2021, 06:47 PM
The thorny perch is nice. The look back pose makes this one. Nice gradient in the background.
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