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Lance Peters
07-07-2008, 06:05 AM
These little guys are tiny -- taken at 750mm at a distance of about 22 feet.

D3
Sigma 300-800 zoom @750mm
F5.6
1/320th
+0.3EV
400 ISO

cropped and sharpned.

c&c welcome.

SeanKP
07-07-2008, 07:14 AM
Super detail Lance. That eye ring is awesome. Looks just a little dark to me. I'd also think about cropping from the top and maybe just a hint from the bottom also.

Alfred Forns
07-07-2008, 07:38 AM
Agree with the crop suggestion Will give a much better ration !!!

I like the pose and setting. Would back saturation on the reds just a tad, remember what the camera doses to those tones. Would like to see a little more contrast on the feathers and some work around the eye. Lighter would look better and really pop !! Love the low angle. One of your best Lance I really like this a lot !!! Big Congrats !!!

Harold Davis
07-07-2008, 02:34 PM
awesome perspective, lance!!! do agree the eye could use some brightening. that bird looks a lot like our killdeer.

very beautiful!! great job!!

George DeCamp
07-07-2008, 03:12 PM
Sweet bird and wonderful perspective,it pays to get low down and dirty! Another suggestionwould have beena kiss of fill flash to add a little brightness and a catch light.

A sweet image though Lance congrats!!

Lance Peters
07-07-2008, 04:20 PM
couple of quick changes as suggested.


Thanks for the kind words :)

Harold Davis
07-07-2008, 04:41 PM
oh yeah!!! very nice job on the repost!!

Oscar Zangroniz
07-07-2008, 06:49 PM
Great image Lance. The repost is much better. Very sharp.
Congrats

Gus Cobos
07-07-2008, 06:52 PM
Lance, congrats on the repost, much better...good looking little guy...:D

Alberto Oria
07-08-2008, 12:25 AM
Good job Lance, I liked the first one, but the repost is better!