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Volkan Akgul
05-26-2020, 11:48 AM
186595
hi,
1dmk3 400f5.6
1/2000 f5.6 iso400
criticism adds value. thanks.

Dorian Anderson
05-26-2020, 12:20 PM
Pose is decent and the head looks nice and sharp, so those are a good start. This is a big bird, and I think you have a decent amount of him in focus given angle of approach. The bird is tight in the frame, particularly at left,
so I'd loosen the crop if you can. Clearly shot on an overcast day, but the frame might tolerate a bit of warming. Wish the wings were slightly higher, but dark wing tip behind the head actually helps the eye pop a bit more.

Volkan Akgul
05-26-2020, 12:30 PM
Thanks Dorian, you valued. i will pay attention :) respect.

David Roach
05-26-2020, 07:12 PM
Sharp right where it needs to be. Love the complimentary BG and it looks like there are more details to be had under the near wing but I like it as is. Only wish you caught this beauty just a little earlier in the flight and better separation of the head and far wing. TFS

John Mack
05-28-2020, 02:14 PM
Only nit i have is the far wing and head merging.