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dankearl
01-22-2019, 03:11 PM
Red Tail Hawk.
D610, 600mm, f7.1, 1/1600, iso1600

DSC_7019bp.jpg (http://www.birdphotographers.net/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=179637&stc=1&d=1548187810)

John Mack
01-22-2019, 04:41 PM
I like the down stroke pose and the overall setting.

Jonathan Ashton
01-23-2019, 03:50 AM
You did well to get this Dan well done, I think the head is slightly OOF, the feet look spot on, I don't know if presentation will improve with a little extra sharpening but perhaps worth a look see. I think the grasses and background make for a very pleasing image.

gail bisson
01-23-2019, 05:04 AM
Great wing position and BG.
I would sharpen the head a bit more as it is OOF and would love to see a bit more room in front of the hawk.
I would also clone out the2 OOF grass behind the hawk.
Gail

Dorian Anderson
01-23-2019, 10:51 AM
The pose and setting are great, but the image isn't perfectly focused. Noise is starting to rear its head on that near wing as well.

Doug Brown
01-23-2019, 12:05 PM
Powerful downstroke and nice habitat. I would like to see some additional sharpening of the head, and I think a horizontal crop would work better here.

Isaac Grant
01-23-2019, 01:05 PM
The pose and the setting are great. But the image is too dark for me and the hawk is not sharp. I do not think that additional sharpening would make a difference as the whole bird looks to lack critical fine feather details.

Arthur Morris
01-31-2019, 05:42 PM
Great red tail. Great pose. In addition to the problems mentioned above the head is pretty much lost in the base of the wings.

with love, artie