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Griffin
01-09-2008, 10:23 AM
Little Ringed Plover
Lamma Island, 2008-01-05
Canon EOS 1D MK.2, EF500mm L, EF1.4x II 550EX + BB, Flash -1 2/3
f/11, 1/100s, ISO250
camera RAW, cropped, turned a little, clonning

Thank you for viewing and please comment.


Regards,
Griffin.

Axel Hildebrandt
01-09-2008, 10:49 AM
Very nice angle and light, Griffin. I might give it more room on top and little bit less right. Did you clone something in the upper right? It looks a bit darker than the rest of the BG.

Arthur Morris
01-09-2008, 11:48 AM
Axel is right on with his comments. I would add that pointing the lens an inch or two more to the left thus moving the bird a bit back in the frame would be an improvement as would eliminating the credit line or greatly reducing the size and impact...

I love the pink light and the reflection.

later and love,

artie

Jody Melanson
01-09-2008, 04:50 PM
I echo Artie and Axel's comments. Very nice. I might brighten him just a bit as well.

Welcome to BPN!

Fabs Forns
01-09-2008, 09:28 PM
Hi Griffin, red carpet welcome to BPN!!!

Great advise on how to improve a very nice image :)


Looking forward to more.

Griffin
01-10-2008, 10:04 AM
Thanks for all the comments.