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Paul Burdett
12-11-2018, 12:29 AM
Caught quite a few black shouldered Kites yesterday...some in flight looking straight at me. However, I thought I'd try for a creative blur shot for a change. When I saw it on the computer my first thought (and maybe yours too...lol) was to trash it, but the more I looked at it the more I liked it (and that's all that matters..right?:w3)despite the HA, noise etc. Anyhow...feel free to comment good or bad. Cheers.
7Dii, 100-400 at 400mm, 1/200th sec, f5.6, iso800, in AV mode hand-held.

Tim Foltz
12-11-2018, 12:56 AM
Paul, hate to say it but for me just a bad shot, HA is wrong, bird is moving away, talons are the main focal point IMO.

-Tim

arash_hazeghi
12-11-2018, 01:22 AM
Agree with Tim Paul, this one isn't working for me....

Joseph Przybyla
12-11-2018, 05:49 AM
Hi Paul, ditto Tim's and Ari's comments. If mine I would trash it for the reasons said. Thank you for sharing.

gail bisson
12-11-2018, 07:04 AM
Trash bin for me but if YOU like it, keep it!!
Gail

Isaac Grant
12-11-2018, 11:34 AM
Head angle is wrong, wing position is wrong, focus point is wrong but i like it! Interesting and unique. I would keep it for sure.

Bill Dix
12-11-2018, 12:33 PM
I don't mind the blur, but just wish the bird was angled toward you. Still, I'd keep it in the file.

Paul Burdett
12-11-2018, 02:40 PM
Thanks all...I guess I was expecting the "trash it" comments, but I'm with Isaac on this one. Cheers!

Daniel Cadieux
12-11-2018, 06:47 PM
I'm afraid this one would be a "delete" for me as well. A different take on the subject.

David Salem
12-12-2018, 01:20 AM
Keep it for now because the funny thing is you can look back on it in a few years and laugh at how you spent time on an image like that. :bg3: I look back on stuff and crack up at what I thought was killer. It's all relative. Keep shooting and you will better this by a mile!!

Paul Burdett
12-12-2018, 01:56 AM
Hi David. I agree:w3

Arthur Morris
12-12-2018, 06:04 AM
Bad shot. Pleasing blurs need to meet the same standards as sharp shots do ... Everything matters: sharp focus, subject to sensor plane orientation, head angle, light angle, image design, and wing position for starters. This image is not up to snuff on most of those.

See A Guide to Pleasing Blurs here. (http://birdsasart-shop.com/a-guide-to-pleasing-blurs/)

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