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John Mack
06-04-2018, 02:02 PM
This image was created in Ithaca, New York on 5/26/18 at 4:05PM. Image adjustments in Lightroom and Photoshop.

Camera on sticks triggered with remote. Reflector used to bounce some light on the flower.

Canon 5D MarkIV
Canon 180mm 3.5L Macro USM
ISO 800
f5.6
1/800sec

Jonathan Ashton
06-05-2018, 05:46 AM
Good idea, I like the limited DOF, I think it might be improved if the stamens were a little more discernable, a few tweaks with highlights or luminosity masking would help. I think with this type of image one particular item/area really has to hit you in the eye as it were, I think the three taller stamens need to be accentuated.

Allen Sparks
06-06-2018, 07:46 PM
I like the colors, subject placement, and BG here. I do find my eye wandering some on the image and looking at the oof petal in the foreground.