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kevin Hice
05-26-2018, 04:01 PM
Shot from Jon Boat blind on tripod. Processed Dpp 4,Photo shop curves. Thanks for critiques and suggestions.
Canon 5D Mark1V 500 with 1.4 converter.
Manual Mode
AV 5.6
Shutter 1/800
IS0 3200

Daniel Cadieux
05-26-2018, 05:33 PM
I like the preening pose, and the featehrs along the flanks/sides. I'd have preferred less room below (maybe about half what you currently have) and more to our left.

Paul Burdett
05-26-2018, 10:52 PM
Hi Kevin. Very nice! I like the pose and the background colour. Nice detail in the wing below the beak. I'd reduce the highlights.

Ákos Lumnitzer
05-27-2018, 05:25 AM
There are a lot of distracting highlights on the surface, but I too, like the preening pose, point of view. Agree with Daniel re space below.

kevin Hice
05-27-2018, 08:56 AM
Thanks Daniel,for the advice I did recrop just didn't want to crop so hard originally because I had to move the bird in the frame. I cut off the bottom but couldn't add to the left with out adding canvas. Also tried to reduce the high lites.

kevin Hice
05-27-2018, 08:58 AM
Thanks Paul did reduce the highlights but not so sure it worked out.

kevin Hice
05-27-2018, 09:00 AM
Thanks Akos not so sure the highlights worked out so well on the re post.

Daniel Cadieux
05-28-2018, 04:24 AM
I think you went he opposite way in the highlights - they are better and more detailed on the original post.