View Full Version : Marbled Gotwit - Take off
Jay Ing
01-28-2018, 12:53 AM
Got a few in sequence on this fella. Wish I'd stopped down a stop but overall pleased with this one.
Nikon D850+Sigma 500/4 + 1.4 TC, 1/3200, 6.3, ISO 320, HH, C1P raw, AF clone work, PS CCC 2018 NR SS on output. Sadly, fairly decent crop - 850 pixels help.
Randy Stout
01-28-2018, 06:57 AM
Jay:
Great full down wing pose, good angle in the frame towards us, allowing us to see both wings well. Trailing feet. Well exposed .
Good composition.
To my eye, the head is just a bit soft, might consider some localized sharpening there.
DOF is always a two edged sword. Yes, you want all the subject in focus (generally), but then the background can become more distracting.
I might soften the darkest areas at the top of the frame just a bit.
Cheers
Randy
Daniel Cadieux
01-28-2018, 03:32 PM
Good reflexes to get this fella taking off. Sometimes they give clues about wanting to take flight, but you still need to be well prepared, so kudos! I agree with Randy's critique and suggestions.
John Mack
01-28-2018, 06:07 PM
Perfect pose and great timing here. Head looks a tad soft.
Mike Poole
01-29-2018, 11:09 AM
Nice work Jay, not an easy shot to get, especially with the nice wings down pose. Sharpness looks Ok to me, maybe try another with a touch more added and see what you think
Mike
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