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Oscar Zangroniz
06-22-2008, 07:35 PM
Taken last Saturday at Crandon Gardens

Nikon D300
Nikon 70-200 2.8 vr
Focal length: 190mm
Shutter speed: 1/640 sec
Aperture: 2.8
Exposure mode: Av
Flash: Off
Metering mode: Multi-segment
ISO: 400

Your comments and critiques are most welcome.

Lance Peters
06-22-2008, 08:04 PM
Hi Oscar - Nice bird - gotta love peacocks.

Head angle doesn't look to bad to me, however find the lack of detail in the eye distratcing.

I have D/L and tried some adjustments.

Applied some shadow highlight correction to the entire image - then backed the blues off a bit.
Tried to lighten and sharpen the eye.
Also sharpened a bit as well - might be too much.

Sid Overbey
06-22-2008, 08:23 PM
Lovely shot Oscar. The original blue was a little intense and I liked the way Lance muted it. Good capture!

Nonda Surratt
06-22-2008, 09:02 PM
These guys always look not quite real! Good going Oscar! Nice re-post Lance, like what you did with the eye.

Alfred Forns
06-22-2008, 09:35 PM
You guys are cleaning up with the peacocks !!! I like the work around the eye on the re post !!

Excellent framing and good head position !!!

Nicki Gwynn Jones
06-23-2008, 02:22 AM
Lovely shot Oscar - actually I liked the blue in the original!! Like Lance's eye though.

SeanKP
06-23-2008, 04:21 AM
I agree with Nicki on both points. Nice shot.

Harold Davis
06-23-2008, 03:07 PM
awesome capture, oscar!! love the framing. lance's work on the eye is good too!

Richard Waas
06-24-2008, 04:11 PM
Way to go Oscar! See you Saturday AM

Gus Cobos
06-24-2008, 08:26 PM
Lance; from now on, you will be called "THE EYE MAN"...:D:p;) I like the clean up on the eye...:D
Oscar, I like the capture and composition...congrats...:D

Lance Peters
06-24-2008, 08:27 PM
Gus - thanks mate - yeh I have a real thing about the eye's - its so easy to fix and makes abig difference.