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James Parker
06-20-2008, 07:22 PM
I thought this might cool everyone off!

D2X
1/80 s
Shutter Priority
F/5.6
400 iso
600mm
Exp Comp +2/3

Alfred Forns
06-20-2008, 07:49 PM
Hi James

Pretty pose and like the head turn Would rather have a little more of a turn. The snow right below the bird has lost detail for being over. Would try cloning out since it detracts from the image. Did a slight color correction.

As presented like all the elements but not together. The bottom part is very busy. btw I think the point of focus is on the back of the bird.

Lance Peters
06-20-2008, 08:33 PM
Beautiful bird - love the colours, but agree with AL - for me the most distracting bit is the POF on the tail.

:)

Oscar Zangroniz
06-21-2008, 06:11 PM
It also seems a little soft on the bird. Maybe it's my monitor. Never the less a beautiful bird.

Nicki Gwynn Jones
06-22-2008, 04:49 PM
Agree with Oscar - sweet pose!