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Michael Thompson
07-21-2017, 08:58 PM
I got this one Sunday morning on a northern Minnesota lake, the daylight is taking over and the stars and aurora pillars are fading fast. Canon 6D , Rokinon 14 mm at f4, 5 seconds 1600 iso, tripod.

Glenn Pure
07-22-2017, 01:58 AM
Wow - fabulous scene and execution. I really like the remnants of the aurora and last of the stars reflected nicely as well.

Don Railton
07-22-2017, 10:56 PM
Hi Michael,

Well done from me in getting up to capture this shot.. and you have a nice array of colour here.. From a composition point of view i would have left out the trees on the LHS border as much as possible, for me they are (slightly) distracting, and then cropping a little from the top?.. I also think the image could benefit from a little more processing... for instance, by using a curves layer and adding a simple 'S' curve to darken the lower mids and brighten the upper mid tones makes the colours pop more but the darks also go a little heavy towards a silhouette (but maybe you prefer this look??). If you want to keep detail in the blacks then you can counter this by using a luminosity mask to limit the effect of the layer in whatever luminosity band you choose..(darks > mids >brights).. Luminosity masks are a wonderful tool and there is lots on the net on how to use them if you have not already done so.. Look up Arron Dowling...but there are many others..

Don

Don Railton
07-22-2017, 11:06 PM
Sorry Michael.. I forgot to add that I also thought it needed a little sharpening, and i did that selectively on the trees only using a mask... and have included my interpretation of your image, what do you think?

Michael Thompson
07-23-2017, 10:50 PM
I Don, nice job on sharpening, I agree about cropping the left dead trees and some off the top, but your color edit looks a bit over saturated on my screen. thanks for the feed back...

Adhika Lie
07-29-2017, 09:35 AM
Very very nice, Michael! I really like the centered composition of Ursa Major. I like the OP's color but would like to see the FG sharpened as well.

dankearl
07-30-2017, 04:03 PM
I agree with a bit of sharpening, but like the OP.

John Mack
08-03-2017, 10:40 AM
Nice color in this with a good composition. The stars are a nice touch.

Colin Driscoll
08-11-2017, 11:13 PM
Lovely colors and I prefer the OP, but yes could do with sharpening. I suggest you consider using DxO viewpoint to straighten the inevitable leaning trees from using such a wide angle lens.

Andrew McLachlan
08-13-2017, 07:40 PM
Hi Michael...ditto on the sharpening and I too would prefer to not see the trees on the left side of the comp...gorgeous color in the sky!