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Tomasz Zawadzki
03-25-2017, 10:42 AM
Taken with:
Canon EOS 5D Mark IV
EF600mm f/4L IS II USM +1.4x III
ƒ/9.0
1/400
ISO 2000
keith mitchell
03-25-2017, 10:56 AM
Excellent, the colours on the bird is perfect to my eyes,lovely detail.
Steve Kaluski
03-25-2017, 12:13 PM
A sweet image Tomasz, with a lovely complimentary backdrop. My only comment would be, drop the Blue, evident in the beak and reduce the yellow in Luminance and or Saturation for the lichen on the branch.

TFS
Steve (Dzień dobry)
Daniel Cadieux
03-25-2017, 01:31 PM
Beautiful done overall. I like how the yellow lichens match the base of the bill. I'd likely burn the extreme LLC as there is a bit of a pale area there. Otherwise all good.
Tomasz Zawadzki
03-25-2017, 01:56 PM
Thank you all for feedback. Can anybody tell me what LLC stands for? I am not sure what that means.
Joseph Przybyla
03-25-2017, 04:09 PM
Thank you all for feedback. Can anybody tell me what LLC stands for? I am not sure what that means.

Hi Tomasz, lovely image. Thank you for sharing.

LLC is abbreviation for Lower Left Hand Corner
Isaac Grant
03-25-2017, 08:56 PM
All looks great to me. Colors, details, that great perch. You have been posting lots of really great looking shots. I would likely clone out the darker area on the lower left.
Tomasz Zawadzki
03-26-2017, 01:52 AM
Thank you guys for the feedback.
Tomasz Zawadzki
03-26-2017, 02:02 AM
Here is the frame after i have applied your tips:

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Jonathan Ashton
03-26-2017, 06:06 AM
Tom first class, my first reaction was reduce the yellows a little. The comment regarding the blue - I must admit it didn't occur to me but just a slight reduction does indeed make a significant improvement to an already lovely shot.
Daniel Cadieux
03-26-2017, 12:43 PM
Getting rid of the pale area, the one in the LLC :S3:, made a big difference.
keith mitchell
03-26-2017, 12:56 PM
Would not have noticed it if Steve had not pointed it out but the removal of the blue certainly works.

Keith.
stuart wanuck
03-26-2017, 06:09 PM
yes quite a nice image cloning helped
Brandon Holden
03-26-2017, 07:33 PM
Love the first version, and the second is even better. Congrats on a great image.
Satish Ranadive
03-28-2017, 01:30 AM
Excellent image with beautiful colors and nice details. Superb BG and composition.

Regards,
Satish.

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