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Jonathan Spool
01-29-2017, 03:37 AM
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I just got back from Kauai. It is quite a magnificent island. I removed a distracting branch in PS. I wasn't sure if the existing dead branch should stay or go.
OMD EM1 MKii. M Zuiko 12-100 f4 Pro
1/640 sec f/8 28mm

Andrew McLachlan
01-29-2017, 08:33 PM
A nice silhouette Jonathan. I like the inclusion of the dead branch...if it were mine I would be tempted to crop off some of the bottom portion of the silhouette as it is a little heavy for my tastes with that much solid black along the bottom edge...looking forward to more from your trip!

Don Railton
01-31-2017, 07:26 AM
Hi Jonathan

I too would crop a bit off the bottom. The dead branch does not bother me

Don

Jonathan Spool
01-31-2017, 10:44 AM
Thanks for the suggestions and input. I will see what that looks like considering the move out of an 8x10 format.

Don Lacy
02-17-2017, 09:02 AM
Hi Johnathan, Agree with the others on taking som off the bottom as well as a bit from the left.

Jonathan Spool
02-18-2017, 01:26 PM
Here is a repost of the picture taking into consideration some of the suggestions made to me. Let me know what you think.
Thanks
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Amanda Robinson
02-22-2017, 06:55 AM
I prefer the warmer image, your shots are wonderful.