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Joseph Przybyla
01-26-2017, 11:07 AM
I captured this image along Joe Overstreet Road in Kenansville, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

Nikon D7000
Nikon 80-400mm F/4.5-5.6 VRII AR-S ED shot at 400mm (600mm FFE)
1/1250 F/5.6 Matrix Metering EV 0 ISO 200
Post processed in Lightroom CC and Photoshop CC 2017
Cropped for composition and presentation

Jonathan Ashton
01-26-2017, 01:29 PM
Well focused and a pleasant pose I would suggest lowering the exposure a little. I think you can get more detail in the chest /throat.

Geoffrey Montagu
01-26-2017, 05:28 PM
Great capture of this songster. Nice and sharp, and the barbed wire perch works for me. Lovely shade of green BG.

Geoffrey




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Joseph Przybyla
01-26-2017, 08:59 PM
Well focused and a pleasant pose I would suggest lowering the exposure a little. I think you can get more detail in the chest /throat.

Hi Jonathan, thank you for viewing and commenting. Here is an edit and repost. I lowered the exposure and revisited the sharpening.

Joseph Przybyla
01-26-2017, 09:02 PM
Great capture of this songster. Nice and sharp, and the barbed wire perch works for me. Lovely shade of green BG.

Geoffrey




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Hi Geoffrey, than you for viewing and commenting. The green background is a grassy cow pasture that is behind the barbed wire fence.

Jonathan Ashton
01-27-2017, 08:32 AM
Much prefer the repost Joe!

keith mitchell
01-27-2017, 09:15 AM
The repost is the one for me Joe,smart neat bird on a lovely smooth bg.

Keith.

Isaac Grant
01-27-2017, 10:10 AM
I love that kind of background. Really sets the bird off nicely. Exposure on the original image is fine to my eyes. The repost is too dark and the whites of the chest and belly have turned gray which is not what you want to happen. Perhaps you could add a little extra sharpening to the original and a better head angle would have been more ideal as well.