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Robert Kimbrell
01-19-2017, 07:00 PM
1DdxII 600II & 1.4
1/4000, F5.6, ISO 2500
Bird baited and shot from a blind.

Isaac Grant
01-19-2017, 08:25 PM
Beautiful landing pose and raised wing. Prey item adds interest. Background is very nice as well and I love the water droplets flying about.

Image feels a little dark to me and I think would benefit from raising the exposure.. Also a little cramped on the top. I would take some off of the bottom where I don't think the room below the tail adds anything to the photo and add that space to the top. Also I went back to this shot 3 times on 2 different screens and still am not 100% on it but I think it is not tack sharp. Not sure if it is from motion blur or just needs a bit of extra sharpening.

arash_hazeghi
01-20-2017, 12:50 AM
I like this dynamic frame Robert, I agree with Issac re placement and also sharpening the bird a bit more. would have been nice if you could place the perch a bit lower to be eye level with the KF when he lands

TFS

David Salem
01-20-2017, 01:03 AM
Cool looking landing frame Robert. The pose, colors and perch all look great. I do agree with everything on Isaacs critique. Needs a bit of exposure increase and sharpening. Great job catching this one.

Jonathan Ashton
01-20-2017, 03:04 PM
A fine shot Robert, certainly worthwhile reprocessing along the suggested guidelines, this could be a real stunner of a shot.

gail bisson
01-20-2017, 05:55 PM
This is FANTASTIC!
I am OK with the amount of room on the top but agree with a bit more sharpening.i think the exposure is OK because if you increase it the whites around the neck will be blown.
Great frame and I love the extended wings and the water droplets,
Gail

Isaac Grant
01-22-2017, 02:50 PM
I think something more along these lines would be better for this shot. As I mentioned above I took room from the bottom and added to the top. Then I rotated the image a bit to get rid of the steep angle of the perch. Lightened the background and added a bit of extra sharpening to the bird. This would be much better on the original of course.

Robert Kimbrell
01-22-2017, 05:31 PM
Thanks Isaac, and everyone for the responses. I like you version Isaac. The rotation looks good. I also like the exposure. I was hesitant to bring up the exposure globally as I feel the whites would get too hot. I appreciate all the comments and suggestions and will put them to good use as I have many more taken on this day. Hope to post another pose in the next few days. Thanks again for the feedback.