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Jonathan Ashton
11-18-2016, 04:52 PM
Canon 1DX Canon 100-400L IS II @ 100mm ISO 100 + 0.67 1/400 sec f11
All comments welcome.

Randy Stout
11-19-2016, 08:39 AM
Jon:

I like this one a lot. The floating mountains, flying saucer cloud, tree in foreground for some additional sense of depth, the lighting. If time allowed, I could see moving about some to change the relative relationship of the tree to mountains, perhaps a bit to your right to move the tree left just a bit, which would also move the flying saucer cloud to the right a bit. Lots of very neat components here to work with! I am very fond of the Grand Tetons, having been there on a family vacation as a child.

Cheers

Randy

Steve Kaluski
11-20-2016, 04:37 PM
Very different Jon, like it, touch of the 'Twilight' zone perhaps!!!

Are there two people walking on the bank, if so I would 'beam the up'. :bg3:

Andrew McLachlan
11-22-2016, 01:42 PM
A lovely scene Jonathan! Processing of the image file is great and ditto on the two people on the bank. I too would like a little more separation between the tree and cloud...as presented I think they are spaced perfect for a vertical crop, but for the horizontal view a short jog to the right would have put some additional space between them...alternately you could always move the cloud further to the right with a quick mask :S3:

Jonathan Ashton
11-22-2016, 02:57 PM
Thanks for the feedback, i have several versions from slightly different angles including a portrait orientation.
They are not people - they are trees in various states of leaf bearing.

Rachel Hollander
11-24-2016, 09:22 AM
Hi Jon- I am late to this but going to check out your landscapes from your trip. This is a very unique shot of the area which is not easy to do. Congrats. The cloud really adds a lot. Well processed and good placement of the tree. Interesting to see the Tetons with no snow except the permanent glacier. I haven't been there in the fall so haven't seen them like this.

TFS,
Rachel

Morkel Erasmus
11-27-2016, 01:53 PM
The layering, soft light and quirky cloud placement at the top really makes this one that holds the attention, well done! :5

Jonathan Ashton
11-27-2016, 05:40 PM
Ok Thank you Rachel & Morkel

John Whaley
12-01-2016, 11:42 PM
A beautiful image

stuart wanuck
12-15-2016, 02:32 PM
very well done